Comment 2 Deresha

Nice job Deresha because you explained everything thoughtfully and did everyhtimg correctly

Nice job Jhoel, you did explained everything and didn't make any mistakes

Cycle 2 Week 8

Using technology helped me to realize all that technology and humanity can do the impossible when we work together. I did good in all of my blogs. The blogs helped me towrite and that my audience can read and put posts in my blogs to see what I can do better. I think that I can do better in typing my feelings and trying to become a better writer. Iwould like to talk with each other using blogs so that we can do our work silently and talking to teammates at the same time.

Comment 2 Neeja

Nice job Neeja but you could have put more information and use the format given to you.

Comment 1 Jose

Nice work Jose. You did good in your explaination and doing good in outting in your link for your blog

Cycle 2 Week7

One of the famous oil spills is called the Amoco Cadiz and it was caused by faliure steering machine and it crashed into the rocks. The damage and the spill was the 1,619,048 barrels of oil and was located in Portsall Rocks, Brittany, France. The story said,"Severe weather resulted in complete breakup of the ship before any oil can be dumped out of the wreck." This shows that there were not only errors in protecting the ship from leaking oil but also while cleaning up the oil. This reminds me of the our oil lab that even thought we didn't refect or notice it, the oil went to the lab tables and they were hard to clean up, and so that shows the problem of cleaning up the surface or land covered in oil.

Comment 2 Micheal Morris Jr.

Good job! You just need to add more details and explanation

Comment1 Jose

Nice job Jose. You did everything right in your blog. A job well done.

Cycle 2 Week 6

Some of the types of engineers are computer engineers, audio engineers, and civil engineers that make good sound material, computers, and houses or buildings. The type of engineer i would want to be is an audio engineer because I like sounds and music traveling into my ears, the sounds are powerful and they're fun to listen to.The website says,"But it may surprise you to learn that the creation of audio is a unique endeavor that blends both art and science." As proof, this shows that the sounds are hard to come by and it will fascinate you beyond your wildest dreams. This reminds me of the music and art,expressing the emotion and the drive to try, to excel in you life.

Comment #2 Jose

Nice job Jose. You mostly dod everything right.

Comment #1 Jhoel

Nice job Jhoel. You really did a good job of saying how you really feel about your blogging.

Cycle 2 Week 5-blogging in schools

One of my ideas in blgging in class is that we can show our work and let people comment on you're work. Also, it helps you to discuss your work with your teachers. It can be private and no one will know that your grades. Blogging helps in schools because they can show their progress in education. Also it helps in making communication easier in or around the schools.

Cycle2 Week5-my blogging

My blogging has improved my writing by not making mistakes easily and having high scores. It alos improved my writing by using more detailed words. Blogging helps me to write more quickly on my open ended. Also I feel more better in my reading skills because of my blogs. Google had helped me to ge better in communicating with my friends.